this chapter was originally longer. It was combined with Chapter 3. I felt the first chapter being 52 pages long was enough So I chapter 2 into 2 and 3. I liked the suspense that was left at the end of this chapter. The revisions in this chapter sees an updated page to the chase scene.
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this chapter was originally longer. It was combined with Chapter 3. I felt the first chapter being 52 pages long was enough So I chapter 2 into 2 and 3. I liked the suspense that was left at the end of this chapter. The revisions in this chapter sees an updated page to the chase scene.